Saturday, August 20, 2005

sms haiku

Amazing how the simple act of exchanging sms haikus with your girlfriend can make one more aware of the world...

It began with this one:

Green man walking past silhouette reformed,
snow cloud solitary above the trees


and she bettered me by sending this one:

And the breeze passes through me, empty
I help a friend's plant grow by sighing


and then this one a little later:

Roof top forks and knives and mouths
rababa sadness blows my mind like crunchy leaves

4 Comments:

Blogger mueen said...

salamualikum: why don;t u try someone great to write some best to read.try ........please..write good on topics.. wasalam Mueen...

7:08 PM  
Blogger mueen said...

sms..is best and should be used for best ,its made to communicate for good it should be used to do good tasks & not to send idiot words to each other..........ur mueen.

7:11 PM  
Blogger raf* said...

a-

you have a salafi "i'm in love with you" stalker ... that's either the coolest degree of stalkerness OR increadibly tedious.

damn zionists.

--raf*

4:27 PM  
Blogger Henry Thompson said...

sms haiku on google and your text was the first thing that came up.
I texted bad haiku to a friend in a meeting in Sanaa:
Chew the cud Oh Oxy cow
the path of least resistance
to the dairy leads

Thanks for yours, I must try harder...
Henry

2:19 PM  

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